Could i have some feedback on these new poems?

Sami’s Memory





A memento of her memory


transformed to coldness to convey


all the warmth in the world


tenderness that will forever stay





The innocent scent of first love


Places in five cities forever still


As though our spirits play in time


In the divinity of free will





My head against her heart


silences the singing sands


Gives her a chance to build inside


a world where we will forever dance





the first scent will be the last


white envelope of new perception


to my daily Christening


In the warm water reception





the poetry in me still harvested


from a soul planted in the earth


of a time when all is forgiven


in the miracle of rebirth





Grayness





Feelings innate and unexplainable


Fall in the rain, an unwelcome gift


Making the world an unbearable gray


I always thought I would celebrate


Now, the ambiguity of gesture


marked by the innocence of her gaze


My fuzzy eyes seeking hope in the haze


longing for the rebirth of the rainbow


For strangers could be anything


From saviors to Satans


When the forever fog lifts


over the oceans of coveted sleep,


Will unquestioned trust and unrequited love


Be given so unabashedly?


Yes.








Pregnant





Impregnate me with the seed of inspiration


Wild flowers that wilt in my womb


could be anything if you’d allow


become fertile pieces of denial


My fingers give a bitter lonely birth


Of never knowing human touch


Renounce our offspring as mine alone


Loveless love children I long to give your name.

Could i have some feedback on these new poems?
the last one was real weird. i think you should cultivate the stranger type stuff. its different. your own.
Reply:Those poems were awesome. They were so descriptive with detail!!
Reply:Awesome if u ask me. I really loved Sami's memory.